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Writer

Your draft needs to make the outcome obvious to a reader who is skimming under time pressure.

It shows the writer understands the reader's context, not just grammar.

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Best use cases

Grant writing
case studies
sales pages

Sample proposal

Your draft needs to make the outcome obvious to a reader who is skimming under time pressure. I have rewritten funding and sales materials by tightening the narrative, moving proof earlier, and clarifying the ask. I would restructure the document first, then polish the language once the argument is clear. Who is the final reader for this piece?